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Game Intro

Postby tzoli » Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:14 pm

I made a game intro for my game(it isn't finished)
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Re: Game Intro

Postby MrJolteon » Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:21 pm

Nice, but the houses could be better(the bombs and planes too), and sometimes, the bombs explodes on the planes
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Re: Game Intro

Postby tzoli » Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:23 pm

Thanks.I will redraw they
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Re: Game Intro

Postby Camper1995 » Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:37 pm

Not bad, but there is still what to make better.

1) Add some backgrounds, it looks much better than a single color.
2) The intro is too long. It's little bit boring to watch how the planes are relasing bombs on those houses. Make it shorter.
3) Add sounds.
4) Add music.
5) Re-draw the houses.
6) Make that you can skip the intro for those who don't want to watch it.

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Re: Game Intro

Postby tzoli » Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:53 pm

Thanks I will made theese.
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Re: Game Intro

Postby RippeR7420 » Fri Feb 18, 2011 12:16 am

I personally really like this. A background and some other artwork would just make it that much more rad :)
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Re: Game Intro

Postby tzoli » Sun Feb 20, 2011 8:11 am

I repaired somethings.
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Re: Game Intro

Postby MrJolteon » Sun Feb 20, 2011 9:48 am

Better, but the skip button should dissappear when the menu appears
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